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PostSubject: Aradine/Elf-Human/-Shaman   Aradine/Elf-Human/-Shaman Icon_minitimeMon Jan 06, 2014 12:40 am

Aradine/Elf-Human/-Shaman Aradin11

Name: Aradine Elizabeth Miston
Age: Biogical age is 17.
Gender: Female
Race: Elf/Human
Archetype: Shaman- Ice, Earth and Wind (still learning fire and other elements)


Skin Tone: Aradine has very light skin, it has a tint of red for she is always cold.
Eye Color: Dark, dark, dark grey. It appears as black for her pupils are big.
Hair Color: She is a natural blonde, she has white streaks in her hair.
Hair Length: To her chest, she has kept it there since she was 12.
Height: 1.8 Meters
Weight: 47 kg
Body Type: She is petitie but curvy. She looks small and weak, but she has hidden power.


Mother: Menata Miston (dead)
Father: Ayonamo Miston (dead)
Siblings (if any): None, she had a little sister--

Profession: Assassin
Talents: She is great at sneaking around without being seen, she can blend into her surroundings, and she is amazing with a bow and knife.
Abilities: She can make Ice Storms and she can make mini tornadoes that can distract/harm her victim before she kills them.

Strengths: That she can sneak around without being seen, it allows her to kill easier.She blends into her surroundings it allows her to scare her victims before killing them. Aradine does not act out in rage, no matter what situation, she doesn't act out in rage.

Weaknesses: Always being tracked down, being an Assassin is a great danger. Aradine has problems with her past, and sometimes it effects her powers. In a bad way, she once covered a town in snow.

Flaws: Her mouth, she has a cussing problem. Also she has pride in never missing a target, she takes on any challenge no matter how dangerous it is. Aradine will work for anyone, even if it causes danger to her. She will work for two sides, and if she is hired she will kill anyone.

Weapon (if any):
Assassin Creed Bow:
Her Knives:

Her sword:

Personality: Aradine has the no nonsense personality. She is quite, but not shy. If you do not know of her ways, you might assume that Aradine is nice and social when she is the complete oppisite. When Aradine does talk she is a smart ass and very sarcastic. She is very mysterious and unpredictable.

Background: When Aradine was little, she grew up around violence. Her father was also an assassian and to protect his family, her trained Aradine to shoot and fight incase of any danger to come to her. Aradine was often at the werehouse were she trained with her trainer Octiao. He trained her to shoot with an arrow, and hand to hand combat. Her father trained her to sneak without being heard, and to blend in with the shadows. They found out Aradine had powers and taught her how to use them correctly. When Aradine was 10, her baby sister was born. About a year lader, Aradine's father messed with the wrong person and someone broke into their house. When Aradine arrived home from school she walked into the kitchen and she saw her mother and baby sister dead on the floor. From that day on, Aradine was determined to get revenge. When her father found out, he tried to protect Aradine but he was afraid he wouldn't be around for much longer. Her father gave her a assassian trained Lion cub, trained to assassianate and protect the owner. A couple weeks later, Aradine's father was killed and the 11 year old was all alone. Aradine ventured off into a small town, she was accepted there until they learned of what she could do. Aradine then was on the run for 4 years until she got her first Assassination job. Since then she has been living in the city doing other people's dirty work.

RP Example: Aradine stationed herself into the tree, so she could see her victim come by. Oreo was stationed were he needed to be to scare the victim. Luckly for Aradine, the guy was renting a place in the woods for his 'vacation'. 'I wonder what weird shit he must of done to get on this guy's bad list' Aradine thought to herself. Thats when she heard footsteps, Aradine nodded her head and Oreo started to growl. The victim jumped, and look around nervously. He got thrown of gaurd, he was looking for an animal, not her. Oreo was hidden enough to not be seen easily so Aradine knew he was safe. Aradine waited until she thought the time was right and she notched an arrow and sent it flying strait at the victims head. Aradine heard a thud, and knew that her mission was accomplished. Aradine whistled and jumped off the tree, she landed on Oreo's back. Oreo broke into a run, leaving the man dead in the path.

Notes: Aradine has a Lion named Oreo. Her powers:

Some of aradine's earth skills include: She grow roots that capture her enemies (2-3 times a day), she can grow plants that trip her enemies (3-4 times a day), she can get plants grow anywhere (3-4 times a day), she can help dying plants (5-10 times a day), and she can get dirt to dissapear under her victims feet, causing them to fall into a hole (3-5 times a day.)

Some of her wind powers (will make that a main one) include, whiping up a mini tornado (once every 2 months, causes a major power drain), causing slight wind to disable her enemies (2-3 times a week), able to cause a wind storm (2 a month, major power drain) and she can cause a breeze that can make things fly away (10-15 times a day.)

For her ice powers, she can make a patch of ice easily (12 times a day), while freezing a lake is challenging (2 times every 3 months). She can cause mini snow storms (2 a month), causing a major drain of her energy. She can cause someone's body temperature to drop (3 people at a time is her limit), but she rarely does it. She can make the body temperature drop 5-20 degrees, 5 doing less of an energy drain to Aradine and 20 making her nearly pass out. She can cause plants to grow or die with a 7 times a day limit.


Last edited by Pickles on Sat Jan 18, 2014 5:35 pm; edited 3 times in total (Reason for editing : I removed shapeshifter)
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PostSubject: Re: Aradine/Elf-Human/-Shaman   Aradine/Elf-Human/-Shaman Icon_minitimeMon Jan 06, 2014 12:55 am

Are you sure it's the Shapeshifter you meant to take on and not the Transfigurist magic type? Just a check to make sure

You say in the powers that she can whip up a mini-tornado, yet in the archetype you say the only two elements she is good at are Earth and Ice spells

For the powers you need to state the exact extent of what she can do with her elemental magic as well as put limits on them so your character is not over-powered.

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PostSubject: Re: Aradine/Elf-Human/-Shaman   Aradine/Elf-Human/-Shaman Icon_minitimeMon Jan 06, 2014 2:50 am

Yes she is a shapeshifter

She can whip up a mini tornado, she is just really good at Ice and Earth spells.

For her ice powers, she can make a patch of ice easily (12 times a day), while freezing a lake is challenging (2 times every 3 months). She can cause mini snow storms (2 a month), causing a major drain of her energy. She can cause someone's body temperature to drop (3 people at a time is her limit), but she rarely does it. She can make the body temperature drop 5-20 degrees, 5 doing less of an energy drain to Aradine and 20 making her nearly pass out. Then for earth spells, she can cause plants to grow or die with a 7 times a day limit.
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PostSubject: Re: Aradine/Elf-Human/-Shaman   Aradine/Elf-Human/-Shaman Icon_minitimeMon Jan 06, 2014 2:54 am

If you are going to state an elemental skill that is not ice or earth you need to edit in that she knows some wind abilities before hand.

I will let Danny state about shapeshifter related things,

All that you have states are things that she can do with ice powers, what about the earth skills? You barely make a one sentence mention at the end, if ice and earth are her best skills wouldn't she know more earth spells than just that one line?
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PostSubject: Re: Aradine/Elf-Human/-Shaman   Aradine/Elf-Human/-Shaman Icon_minitimeWed Jan 08, 2014 10:51 pm

Minitornados would require quite a bit of dexterity and practice. Definitely something that Shaman would need to be specialized in.
Shapeshifters cannot turn into animals. The description recently got rewritten so you might want to check it again.
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PostSubject: Re: Aradine/Elf-Human/-Shaman   Aradine/Elf-Human/-Shaman Icon_minitimeSat Jan 18, 2014 12:34 am

Alright I will edit that out of there, and I will edit wind powers in there.

Some of aradine's earth skills include: She grow roots that capture her enemies (2-3 times a day), she can grow plants that trip her enemies (3-4 times a day), she can get plants grow anywhere (3-4 times a day), she can help dying plants (5-10 times a day), and she can get dirt to dissapear under her victims feet, causing them to fall into a hole (3-5 times a day.)

Some of her wind powers (will make that a main one) include, whiping up a mini tornado (once every 2 months, causes a major power drain), causing slight wind to disable her enemies (2-3 times a week), able to cause a wind storm (2 a month, major power drain) and she can cause a breeze that can make things fly away (10-15 times a day.)
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PostSubject: Re: Aradine/Elf-Human/-Shaman   Aradine/Elf-Human/-Shaman Icon_minitimeSat Jan 18, 2014 2:15 am

Please add all changes to the form to expedite the approval process.
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PostSubject: Re: Aradine/Elf-Human/-Shaman   Aradine/Elf-Human/-Shaman Icon_minitimeSun Jan 19, 2014 9:30 pm

I added in the changes danny
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PostSubject: Re: Aradine/Elf-Human/-Shaman   Aradine/Elf-Human/-Shaman Icon_minitimeTue Jan 21, 2014 10:43 am

Approved, unless Danny find more to question. For future reference though, please put all of the power limits and otherwise no matter how long, under the abilities section, that's where they are supposed to go
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